Impromptu match- Xtreme Team vs Dark Ones- This was actually an angle concocted by all parties invovled. Syco, Wench, Silvus and I worked out the details for this "match." And obviously I wasn't going to force any of them to RP for something nobody else knew would happen as they all three busted their ass for the Blooded Strap Ladder Match at No Holds Barred.
Jack Clinton vs Adriana Samu- The voting was tied, thus the double disqualification. Plus, this will give all parties involved something to work with in their future RPs. Freak, it's time to mix it up a bit. Having Chris P be the yin to Jack Clinton's yang was a great idea, but I didn't see that executed this time around. Plus, we do have a wrestler on the roster named Emo Kid, so calling everyone a bunch of "emo kids" tends to cheapen the character's name. Let me put it to you this way. When the Undertaker had the Ministry, you didn't hear his rivals call his followers a bunch of "acolytes"(the definition of which is follower), because there was already a tag team on the roster named the Acolytes.
Jillie, good job on countering Freak's first RP. The only thing I would say to work on would be a bit more of creativity for a setting other than a studio. Use one of the SNW endorsed businesses as a setting if you wish(especially now that I allow RPs in those boards to count towards your match), or maybe even your own locker room. Having a promo cut inside a studio is fine every now and then, but tends to get repetitive if done over and over again. I just don't want to see you fall into a rut, mmkay?
Impromptu match- Alley Ratz vs Sixth Street Assassins- Ninja had asked me ahead of time if it was ok to write this impromptu match, and I granted him permission. And I will do this for anyone on the roster that wishes to do so, so long as you're being a good member and RPing faithfully every week.
Andy Lionheart vs Mike LaFontaine- Other Chris, a bit short, but good job on the character development, showing everyone that Lionheart had cut his hair a little bit and darkened it. I understand that this was your first RP in quite some time, so I'll give a little leeway to work that rust off.
Kobra's Law vs Mauler and Mike Hanson- Tim, way to be creative with an interview RP, having Viper wearing a bad wig and making the setting a local gym that the SINdicate work out at. "Whitey Blackman" lol! And you got to the point, not dragging the RP on longer than it should've gone.
- JD, I continue to enjoy how you're developing these characters, finding various appropriate settings for them such as bars and roadhouses. Just keep doing what you're doing. It was just a matter of Tim's RP outvoting your RP is all it really came down to, and I'll admit right now that it was a tough choice picking one over the other. And with having one double DQ already, I didn't want another no-contest.
Nick Scott vs Mike Rutherford- Jugg, I commend you for the length of your RPs. While they're not as long as most, they don't need to be with the characters you have. The only thing I would work on, the same thing I told Jillie, is not getting in a rut and having every promo take place at a studio in front of a banner. Take your characters out and about. After you do that for awhile, you'll really start to have fun with the character development.
- Fawn, nice creative touch with Mike waiting impatiently for one of SNW's reporters to make it out to Pittsburgh, only to get lost. And having Andrew bring on a reporter from another promotion was another nice touch. And the locker room RP was equally brilliant, with Andrew not saying anything, save for one line, because he's so enthralled with the book he's reading while Mike Rutherford is going off about everything. Like I told JD, just keep doing what you're doing.
Hellspawn and Kid Thunder vs Soul Reaper and Cyanide- Ninja, you're coming on strong as a great heel character, but one thing you'll need to work on is not saying the same thing over and over again, ie bringing up their dark side and past reputations. You made your point the first time around, but then seemed to beat it into the ground. So I'll give you the same advice that the Ticket gives itself.. Hit and Run. I think you can figure out what that means.
- Reaper, like I said about a couple other RPs, I don't want you to get stuck in a rut with studio RPs(again, let me re-iterate that I'm NOT saying to never do studio RPs... I'm only saying to mix it up now and then, mix up other settings, and have studio RPs now and then). But I did like the use of the Soul Reaper banner you made at the beginning. Nice touch. Other than that, I can't really tell you anything else other than keep up the good work. Oh, and nice touch using the halls of the Gordietorium for Cyanide's RP.
Now with that, I will be working on the card for Guys Night Out here shortly.