Guys Night Out is posted

[Hollywood]

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Special thanks to:

-Freak for co-writing Zippy's Mailbag

-James Jackson for his segment

-Sam aka Shaggy for writing Destruction Crew vs Ned Carter, Aaron Champion and Bottoms Up, as well as Alley Ratz vs Y Kores

-Chris Angel for writing his opening show promo

Feel free to leave your feedback of the show. Also, Sam will be leaving his thoughts on why the results were the way they were, as well as some promo feedback for everyone tomorrow.

[Wench]

Great write up. Wonderful read

[sh17]

Hello, and welcome to the very very first(and if Hollywood doesn't like it quite possibly the last) edition of Shaggy's RP Analysis! That's right, come here to find out how good(or not so much) you did in the past SNW week! Now, a little bit of a light week this week. The Destruction Crew was a jobber match, so there's nothing I can really say there. However, I do have opinions on the rest so let's get to it! Spin the wheel, make the deal!

Danny Palis
OK, our first subject is the newest SNW member Danny Palis. Now, for those who don't know this man just busted his RP and e-fed cherry here with us at SNW. I was quite pleased with what I saw from you Danny, especially for a first try at this. I know who you are basing this off of, and I really do think you have a nice grasp of the character. Obviously you had a jobber dark match this week, so here in the next couple of weeks you will face some live artillery, but with continued improvement I predict that Danny Palis will be a fine superstar here at SNW!

S.T. Strickler/Wench
Allrighty, next up is the artist formerly known as Katrina and the Real Deal. For the record, this was an agreed upon finish by all parties in order to further a storyline, so RPs didn't come into play. However, reading both here are my thoughts. Wench, another solid outing by you. Ever since returning to the Wench character you have really become a consistent competitor, which is why you won the title again. Good, solid RPing as usual. Strickler, a little lacking from your usual however I didn't really expect your best on a predetermine. A little bit more harsh on Wench would have been appreciated, alas it'd be unfair to chastise you for that. Either way, I enjoyed both your works.

Versus Vince/Chris P. vs. Alexander Draven/Tyler Guevara
OK, to break down this one I'm going to breakdown by character. So, let's start with the newbie here Versus Vince. Vinny, I gotta say I liked your RP this week. Good strong content, solid length. You have progressed quite well, and I am very pleased to see your movement here at SNW. However, you did have one snafu that did dock you a bit on your otherwise good RP. You mis-labeled Wrestlestock "WrestleFest" twice in your RP, which I found odd since you were able to get it right when you mentioned the show the first time. That was the only real points off I had in your RP this week. Chris P., you picked up the win for your team for two reasons. A. Because of Vince's flub, and B. Because you had the best RPs by and large out of the four this week. Your RPs were longer than Vince's, and were jam packed with good content. You, and Vince did this as well, made good notes of what happened around you at WrestleStock and in your opponent's RPs. A very good week for both of you, a nice tag team effort.

Now to the losing end of this match. Alex Draven let Matt know that RPing wasnt' going to work out for him this week, which is fine as long as you tell one of us. Real life sucks sometimes, so we are more than happy to be accommodating. So, that leaves SNW's resident Art Bell Tyler Guevara. Two RPs from you this week, and both were very good and very solid. You've developed Tyler's character quite well ever since he debuted at SNW. You're really catching on with this guy, and I'm looking forward to next week's cage match between you and Vince. It could be a slugfest.

The Alley Ratz vs. Y Kores
Ah yes, the match everyone wanted to see. The #1 contenders for the tag team titles, and boy this was a close one. Both teams showed up to play, and this was a close vote. Alley Ratz, y'all won because you had a bit more originality in your promo. You have really embraced the stoner characters, and have done quite well with that. I am very anxious to see how well you match up against Death Sentence. Y Kores, your RP was a schosh longer however the setting was just kinda basic. An interview style, which you have relied on before. I would have liked to have seen some originality on your part, maybe taken it to a new place. My advice is to use either the Business Ventures that we have conveniently set up for you, or to come up with a more creative location and setting for your RPs.

That's all the time we have today folks, but if you just can't get enough feel free to PM me and bitch at me and I'll gladly give you a more detailed breakdown on your RP. Good night, and have a pleasant tomorrow!

[Bubba JD]

i'll tell you what your opinion is, on my match. you loved it & my promo. got so excited that your keyboard's still sticky. ;D